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Chapter 13 of my book is now out, in which Oliver finds himself in hot water at work and realizes he has a memory-hole from ten years ago; the Noncemeister shows him the Chamber of Time; and Oliver then meets the returning Maren only to make a shocking discovery about her https://www.casanostra.ink/24-chapter-13-coast/

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BTCapsule 🏴 2 years ago

I feel like you’re telling me to quit my job and devote all my time to nostr 😂😂 Great advice in this chapter. It seems like Oliver’s whole life is falling apart. I feel bad for Hope, and it sucks Oliver can never actually explain himself. This is a nice twist on Maren. I’m not sure what her motives are, but I like the “don’t trust” narrative. Can’t wait for the next chapter ⚡️