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Chapter 16 of my book is now out, in which Oliver finally learns what happened when he was thirteen; Vince makes Oliver a compelling proposal, as more concerning news emerges about Maren; Daniela holds the key, and Oliver pays a visit to Belfast in 1977 https://www.casanostra.ink/24-chapter-16-tissue/

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Avi Burra 🛡️ 2 years ago

@NEW1 @elsat @npub1dld9...fd8s @BTCapsule 🏴 👆

BTCapsule 🏴 2 years ago

Daniela seems trustworthy, but I still don’t know about her 😂 at least she understands what Oliver is going through. Nice shout out to @jack 🫂 his charity to freedom should be mentioned in more books. Maybe Oliver’s dad knew how to make the Noncemeister come back? His "death" is still a mystery 🤔 The painting is very interesting. I’m not sure what the fire means yet, but I’m gonna keep thinking about it

Avi Burra 🛡️ 2 years ago

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On the Noncemeister, remember the part in this chapter where Maren said traumatic events could undo her work? And what do you mean “death” in quotes? 😂

BTCapsule 🏴 2 years ago

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I’m still not sure if Oliver’s dad is really dead, and the traumatic events part makes me think he faked his death to bring the Noncemeister back. I have no idea what’s going to happen, so I make shit up 😂

NEW1 🛡️ 2 years ago

Everything is starting to come together. The connections are starting to form. Im really getting a good feel for the characters from your writing style Im completely hooked from the spiritual point of view. Loving this. Getting suspicious of Maren. Wondering where thats going

Avi Burra 🛡️ 2 years ago

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